Jan. 13th, 2005

stoutfellow: (Ben)
Over break, I read another couple of Patricia McKillip's novels, In the Forests of Serre and Ombria in Shadow. In many respects, these are typical McKillip - intricate plots, delicate and subtle language, and a shell game of spot-the-real-villain. I found both to be satisfying reads, though I still wish she would be a bit more adventurous.

In the Forests of Serre is a retelling of the firebird legend, and this may have constrained McKillip a bit. The plot seemed somewhat more straightforward than usual, and the characterizations less complex. There was, of course, one eldritch character whose motives were opaque until near the end (and they did not become entirely clear then), but the others seemed a bit more, well, stock. Not all of them came off well, either; the scribe, through whose eyes we see much of the story, didn't seem well-developed to me.

I liked Ombria in Shadow rather more. The language in some scenes was a bit coarser than McKillip's usual, but in context it was appropriate. The plot concerns a city-state which has been falling more and more under the influence of a mysterious woman, Domina Pearl. When the city-state's prince dies (perhaps at the Domina's instigation), his son, still a child, succeeds him, but Domina Pearl becomes regent. This begins, at one level, a complex political dance involving the mistress and the bastard son of the late prince, various nobles whose power is being rapidly stripped away by the regent, and the Domina and her minions. On another level, there is the coming of age story of a young woman named Mag, raised by a witch who lives in the undercity and has had many dealings with the Domina - dealings about which Mag is beginning to have qualms. Again, we have one of McKillip's quasi-magical artists in the prince's bastard, and a scholar - the young prince's tutor - whose motives and actions are distinctly ambiguous. The resolution is a bit confusing (although less so than in some of her works), but things definitely get Sorted Out. For anyone who appreciates McKillip's current work, this is, I judge, another winner.

Anxiety

Jan. 13th, 2005 12:43 pm
stoutfellow: (Ben)
The anxiety mentioned in my previous post was a matter of authorial jitters. I sent off the paper yesterday, and was immediately assailed by doubts. (Could something so simple really be new? Did I use the notation correctly? Did I phrase that sentence well?) This morning I checked a usually-reliable online reference regarding one piece of notation, and its version of that notation was somewhat different from mine. (It wouldn't affect the substance of the paper, but it would require a little editing; besides, it's embarrassing to misuse notation...) However, on reaching the office I consulted two other sources - one 19th-century monograph and one current textbook - and both use that notation the same way I do. So at least that worry has gone away. The others remain...

Over the last few hours the weather has shifted from gentle rain to freezing rain to medium-heavy snow. This morning's paper predicted a chilly but clear day. Fortunately, I wore my down jacket and stocking cap. That's the Midwest for you - the weather is rarely if ever boring.
stoutfellow: (Ben)
I finished most of the polishing on the other paper this afternoon - but I still don't have an ending! It just sort of trails off. If I can write a conclusion and get it in the mail tomorrow, good things will happen. I have no classes tomorrow, but several other things need to be done. We'll see.

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