It sounds delightful. I'll have to look for it after I do my Vorkosiverse reread.

The misused apostrophe is one of my pet peeves. So often in legal writing or other people's documents the apostrophe faux pas is more striking than the point being made (g)! What irks me is that I find myself mimicking it when responding, catching it, slapping my false-playing fingers, and correcting it (whew) before it goes. I fear that just seeing it too much makes it contagious!